Wednesday, 29 July 2015
Our Father
Ko te Rahina 27 o te Hongongoi tenei ra.
Our Father, Who art in heaven,
Hallowed be Thy Name.
The Thy Kingdom come.
Thy Will be done, on earth as it is in Heaven.
Give us this day our daily bread.
And forgive us our trespasses,
as we forgive those who trespass against us.
And lead us not into temptation,
but deliver us from evil.
Walt: Identify the number of petitions in the Our Father and what they
are about.
Give us this day our daily bread- Give us food every day
And forgive our trespasses- Forgive their original sins that they have done
in the hole day
As we forgive those who trespass against us- Forgive others that talking
about them
And lead us not into temptation- Control them from doing wrong things
Deliver us from evil- Rescue them from evil
Tuesday, 28 July 2015
Healthy Lunches
Learning Intention:
Walt: Analyse text to identify examples of ethos, pathos and logos.
Persuasive Reading Analysis:https:healthy Lunches
Take another look at the persuasive piece of reading/ writing.
What strategies does the author use to try to persuade you?
Below are strategies writers often use for this form of writing. Read through each
strategy and decide whether the author used that strategy by writing yes or no in the second
column. If you write yes, then explain how the author used that strategy.
Persuasive strategy
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Yes / No
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How the author used it?
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Claim – States the main
point or stance
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Yes
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The author said “That children should eat and drink healthy food everyday in school to be healthy’!
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Big Names – Mentions experts and
important people to support the argument
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Yes
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In some schools children are provided with milk that is delivered fresh every morning.
This author is trying to convince children
aged 5 - 12 to eat healthy and make healthy lunches so that they could are a model for younger children.
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Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or facts to support the argument
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Yes
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Milk is known to support healthy teeth and bones. Fizzy drinks are not good for teeth because the sugar in fizzy drinks causes decay.
should be should be banned from school because it is not healthy and it will rot their teeth, and that is the school's rule. Children have to eat fruit and vegetables everyday because it will keep all of them healthy.
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Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions
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Yes
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Inferring from the text the writer is emphasising the importance that children should eat a healthy lunch to help them grow strong and healthy.
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Ethos – Tries to build trust and
credibility
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Yes
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The writer assumes that the reader has knowledge of healthy food and eating .habits but does not include evidence of research
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Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency
for the cause
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Yes
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He emphasises what will happen to a child's’ teeth and bones if they do not eat well.
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Research – Uses studies and
information to make the argument seem more convincing;
this can be in the form of words,
graphs, tables, or illustrations
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No
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Monday, 27 July 2015
Basic knowledge in Chromebook
I truly believe that basic knowledge in Chromebook is very important because it also talking about the simple Chromebook programming language that uses familiar English designed for beginners. Many different schools use the basics because it helps them in any work they do. The reason why we need to use our Chromebook is because we can read news on current events and general information and also to do educational work and games. Chromebooks is very helpful for gaining knowledge.
But Chromebook it not everything because if the internet is off you can’t use it. You either use a book and a pencil when you do your school work. One main point why Chromebook is really important is because when you got a wrong spelling you can correct it by using the built-in online dictionary but if you got a wrong spelling in your book you can’t correct it straight away unless you have a dictionary at hand or only when the teacher marks your work and corrected it.
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