Facebook is Bad

We are learning to persuade people under 13 not to have Facebook

I think 100% children should not have Facebook.   

We should not have Facebook because some people will swear bad words on Facebook.

And   under 13 year old are too young to have Facebook and they was

no your house and they come throw  rock on your house.

And we are have all of the people who  take a photo of another people like do something very bad on Facebook on the picture of people like bad picture.

And we have all of the people who take photo of another people like do something very bad on Facebook on the picture of people like bad picture and they kidnap  you and bully other people.

Facebook is bad because people swear and take bad photos and they can kidnap you.

Targeting Gardner's

WALT discover why we have ads, how they attract attention and who they target. I know I have discovered why we have ads and how they attract attention by learning what it is about and who is targets. This is a picture of my ad.

My ad is about Debco.  It is targeting the people who have a lot of work but they want to look after their garden.

persuasive mind map

We are leaning  in structure of a persuasive text.
like thesis and reason and conclusion mind map.