An important Day

  

I am learning to plan my ideas before I write and to use my plan to help me sequence my ideas when I write to help my ideas to be clear for my readers. 

Who?	What ?	Where?	When?
Me Emma Asia Mercy	Doing the offertory up the mass	At Saint Patrick church	On Sunday 17th of May

On Sunday the 17th of May,  Emma, Mercy, Asia and I  had the responsibility of doing the offertory  at Mass.   Asia and Mercy carried  the bread and wine and I carried a beautiful necklace  with coloured flowers for Father Michael. Emma brought forward  the bag that held the collection money.  

I didn’t really want to take the necklace because I’m very shy to walk in front of the people.  I was so nervous and I  thought  that I was going to make a mistake but, I forced myself to do it!

My nana wanted men to do  the offertory, but later she told me that she was very happy  and “ proud” of  my cousin and I. When we  got back to her house, after Mass, she gave  us a lollie and a big great hug.

Later that night, when we were going to dinner my nana asked me “ If I could sleep over at her house and because is near to our school” I said “Okay yes”             

I  respect my nana because that is my dad and  mum have taught me.  

After that my nana gave us some money to go and  buy something that we like to eat and then  went and my cousin gave  me my older brother phone to play some music.

Emma  said to  us that she going to buy  5 lollies and 3 chips for us and  

Mercy  said that she goin to buy 3 fizzy drinks and  fruit 2 for each foods  for us three, and I taught them but what I’m going to get with my money? and they said save it for your lunch but we are going to shared to shared what we bought and I told them okay I will then.

We  went home to eat our chung  food and healthy food because my nana said that we have to come home and eat our food. When we went back home we was very happy and we said  thank you to my nana.

So on Sunday it was so cool and fun.