26:06:2015
Room 8 had a class challenge today. The person 2 have to close their eyes and put their right hand on their person 1 shoulder, and their person 1 will tell where to go. The person 2 just only follow the instruction and trust their buddy.
I was closing my eyes and walk with my partner, and we can’t get on the grass because if you taught your buddy to walk on it you will be a big trouble from the teacher, my partner and I reached at the gate without opening my eyes and step on the grass. We waited at the gate for Mrs Dines to come and told us what to do next.
Our teacher was there, and she said that the person 2 come to her and the person 1 have to wait at the gate, until she finish told the persons 2 the plan . This time we allowed to go on the grass around the park down the around the bottom court and then straight inside the classroom.
1 comments:
Well done Miriama. this independent writing sample shows me how you can organise your ideas into paragraphs and include necessary detail so that your reader audience understands your message. You have included comma's and topic specific vocabulary. Fantastic.
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